"I have just returned home after ..."

What I liked

I have just returned home after a two day stay in Guys. This was my first time ever spent in hospital. I found the Doctors, Nurses and the domestic staff an absolute delight. I was admitted with a rather embarrasing illness, and throughout my stay I was treated with the upmost dignity. I would just like to say, a big thank you very much to all the staff on Aston Key ward.

What could be improved

How can you improve perfection.

Anything else?

Only, Thank you